Mikala la discus champ. (DONE)

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[atrb=background,http://i486.photobucket.com/albums/rr229/s-doggy13/misd.png] Mikala Australian Shepherd/Siberian Husky , 1 1/2 years , Female. Click. History; Mikala was adopted from a shelter by her master who was a young adult man. He was applying for jobs when he bought her as a puppy and very soon after, when he got his job he didn't pay much attention to her. However, almost everyday at the end of work he would take her for a walk at night around the neighborhood. She tried what she could to grab his attention and tried to learn how to do things that he could do, not always ending in a good way... For example she tried to take something out of the fridge by pulling open the door and taking out a soda to bring to her master. She lost her balance standing on her back legs and put her front paws on one of the shelves, knocking over a watermelon and other soda cans. When he came into the kitchen he though that she was trying to steal food from the fridge for herself. Nothing about her life as a house dog was drastic and it didn't last very long. All Mikala really thought about was trying to impress her master in order to get attention and if she failed she would think about why she couldn't seem to get him to ntice her more. She never quitted and was persistant until she wondered what it would be like to not be in the house and out to explore the world around her. Being locked in the apartment most of the time she longed for interaction again with other dogs and boundless area to run and roam through. She could remember as a pup, being in the kennel at the shelter was better, well interaction wise. The apartment was more comfortable and soft, but she'd rather be around others. One night on a walk her master was talking to some man in a car by a stop sign, apparently they knew eachother. He really wasn't looking ather and his grip was loose on the leash. With all her might she bolted down the road and ran through out the yards of other people's looking for trees to escape in the woods. As she ran aways he said to herself "Please forgive me master, but I think this will be best for both of us." Mikala had no destination and didn't plan on looking for another master, but her hope was to find others that she could live with and make life more fun. Unfortunately the town she lived in with her master had close to zero stray dogs, the only dogs that she could find were house pets and their masters would often shoo her away. Eventually she grew accustomed to be alone but it never satisfied her. She made a few friends with dogs that stayed out in the backyard most of the day and was cautious to make sure their owners didn't notice her. Mysteriously, Mikala woke up on a summer morning and found her self on an island. The place is beautiful and she already has heard the noise of dogs nearby. Personality; Mikala has a drive to be the best and impress others, especially back when she lived with her master. Due to the lack of attention she always tries to be social and polite with others. Being polite isn't very hard for her and she'd love to have a friend that she can trust.Even though she never really never had a close friend, she'd keep a secret and be loyal. Before she ended up on the island, when she hung around with house dogs by going onto their owner's property, she'd always try to be pulling jokes and brighten their day. The part of her that makes her want to be impressive and the best, also makes her not want to be a female. Most of the female dogs she has met were always wimpy to her compared to the males which were generally more bold. With the countless amount of free time she has, she'd go into the woods and run as fast as she could trying to improve her speed and strength. She can't take being a weakling and wants to be tough. Her outlook on killing prey is not the same as most dogs, from being in a shelter as a puppy she learned to appreciate life and will try to make any killing as quick and painless as she can. She also tries to respect other dogs and if there is one that is just extremely rude she will try to talk things out. However, there are times where she gets so aggrivated, all she wants to do is get her anger out. Mikala has a weird fantasy of getting in a good fight with another dog, but it not resulting in death. She really likes to use her strength and somehow prove a point In a wrap Mikala likes to be around others, has a longing to be considered important or the best and hates weaklings. Appearance; On a scale of 1-4, Mikala is a 2.5 for size like in height. Her fur is long and soft, mainly taking after her Australian Shepherd side. There isn't much about her appearance that resembles a Siberian Husky. The coat color of her is mainly a blue-like, bright silver (blue merle) with slate grey splotches. She has tan on her cheeks and a little bit above her black nose. There is more tan lining on her back legs. The parts of her that are colored white is her lower chest, muzzle, underneck, front left paw, back paws, tail tip and stomach. Her ears are slate grey, her saddle-back marking and front right paw. Mikala's best physical appearance is probably her eyes, wich are a sky-blue. She has a tail that is pricked up that curves downwards which almost makes it look broken, but it is perfectly fine. The longest fur is on her tail and is slightly curly. Weight-wise, Mikala is a desireable weight and her ribs can be barely seen. Her left ear is held a little bit abover her face and her right one sticks up a little bit more. Unlike most dogs of her breed, her muscles are more defined like in her legs which are normally thin midway in the length. These muscle make her legs, rear, chest and stomach harder. Likes & Dislikes; Likes: Water, exercising, joking around, being social, the sun, fire's warmth. Dislikes: Rude dogs, killing animals for fun (torture prey before killing it), dark nights with no moon or cloudy, overweight dogs, physically weak dogs (ones who choose to be weak), litter (pollution) . Goals & Desires; Mikala would really like to be a leader but gain a large group of friends and have the same level of comfort with each other. She doesn't want to be alone and possibley have a mate, but no pups. Even though the island cuts her off from a lot of land she used to have in the United States, she doesn't mind as much as maybe other dogs do. However, she would like to find out how she got here and what the loud noises she hears in the night are. She will take joining a pack into consideration, but what she seems as a dream pack is not an option on the island. Strengths & Weaknesses; Her perseverance and wanting her way could be considered both good an bad. She won't give up on something if she says she will do or accomplish it. This trait could aggrivate other dogs and possibly get her hurt like in a fight she would probably go until death because she believes that she WILL get her way. Mikala isn't totally brave and sometimes is selfish, with her anger. She also like pity. Her best traits are her strength and kindness to others. LONER

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VEGAS , MIKALA , 15.

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Hello. You need to just change one thing.

"Mikala was unconsious when she was brought to the island that she now lives one. The place is beautiful and she already has heard the noise of dogs nearby"

Please change the "brought to the island" to where she wakes up on the island. As of right now we do not know whether they are brought there or... other options. (: It just falters with the plot. I suggest saying something along "when she awoke from being unconsious..."

After this I will re-evaluate. Thanks (:

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Alright I have fixed it Reconsider

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ACCEPTED!