Jet (Finished)

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[atrb=background,http://i486.photobucket.com/albums/rr229/s-doggy13/misd.png] Jet Dalmatian , 6 years, Male. History; My history starts off a little rough, in the middle it gets better then plummets to disaster. Well, if you want to hear me rant on then just sit down and let me tell you the story of Jet. The first thing I remember was the feeling of my first breath. It was a strange but wonderful feeling, I really cant explain how it felt to breath for the first time. Being a pup, my instinct was to go to my mother, though I couldn't find her. Something picked me up by the waist, I struggled and squirmed, trying to get free and reach mom. Something hit my lips, no idea about the world or anything at all really I drank, the liquid was warm. For some reason I loved it and began to depend on the strange liquid. As the days flew by, my small eyes creased open. Everything was so bright, I almost wanted to close my eyes and never open them again, but my mother. Though she wasn't my real mother, more of a foster. But I didn't know that then. At that point I thought I was a Labrador, I thought that I looked just like my brothers and sisters. Though I was all to different, they were a solid brown color while I was black and white. As I grew older and played harder, I was still under the impression that I was a Labrador, though my father. Large and cruel told me the cold, hard truth one day. It tore me apart, they had lied to me, for the first three years of my life.(Yea, They made me think I was one of them for three years! How could I be so dumb!) Being hardheaded I left my family, and for about a year I wandered as a pacifist stray. Yea I said pacifist... But anyway, living on the street wasn't so bad, I could go to the bathroom wherever and no one yelled at me! One day, I was walking around minding my own business when I heard an all to familiar voice, it was my mother and father. I knew my fathers voice when he growled and snarled at my mother, she had upset him somehow and I knew that he would kill her If I didn't do something. That day was the first time I fought, I mean not puppy play fight, I fought like a madly crazed dog! I ran up to my father and tackled him, I must have surprised both my mother was well as my father, because she didn't move. Buy my father quickly got up and started to claw and bite at me, now this is the first time I fought, so I did what I saw on the box that showed pictures. At first I jumped to the left as he lunged at me, teeth bared. Then when he was still dazed that I had moved that fast I tackled his side, sending him on the ground. I quickly ran over and set my paw on his neck, thats when I heard it. It was a ear piercing howl, it rang through the air, but I was the only one that noticed it. After the howl died down everything went black, I heard nothing and saw nothing. When I awoke I was on a beach, I never did find the water comforting as others did, but this time I felt at peace. Thats when everything came zooming back, I quickly got up and started barking things like; Hello!? Anyone there!? I was going mad on that little stretch of land I knew to be a beach. That is, until a small crowd of dogs came to check out what all my ranting was about. Half starved and crazed, they took me in and put me back to health. Its been a full week sense I came to the Island, and I have become a member of the Dystopian Pack. Personality; Well, to most I may seem like a quiet guy who really doesn't have any friends and purposely avoids others. Well, I'll have to tell you that your one hundred and twenty three percent correct. I have no social adaptations and I'm a total stick in the mud. As my family used to call me, but lets talk more in depth. Quiet Yea, I'm a very quiet king of dog. I haven't ever really been that talkative, it got on my siblings nerve that I never spoke, but my people seemed to like it better that way. Though the smaller humans didn't like how quiet I was, they tried to make me bark and such. It got really annoying really, I wonder how are they... Well, lets get back to the point shall we? Distant Yea, I'm pretty distant, I dont have a lot of friends. I have what you would call 'acquaintances' but not friends. I guess that makes me not a cool guy to hang around with. I really dont care though, I like being by myself, it helps me thing more about where I am and how I got here. Loyal Yea, I may be antisocial and such, but I dont turn my back on my friends or family, nor would I turn my back on the pack that took me in as a loner. I owe them my life and my life I shall give them, no matter how I do it. Though I am loyal to my home, wherever it may be now, I can only wonder... And even though I am pacifist, I will drop it and fight until I fall for the ones I care about! Caring Yea, I'm a softie I know. Pathetic for a Dystopian dog right, well, I wasn't born there so I dont have their natural mean nature. I try to be every ones Hero, but sometimes I need a hero to. I try my best to understand everything that's going on with the dogs around me... Sometimes that's not enough... Easily Distracted Oh yea, I easily run off topic so I might do that several times while explaining myself today. I can easily disappear because something caught my attention and lead me astray. Appearance; Well, I guess I'm an average Dalmatian... But I guess you couldn't see me if your blind so here I go. Im the average size of 23 inches, about 2 feet to the shoulder. My spots are... Um I guess normal. Though I'm not sure how a normal spot would be placed... Back to the point though, my paws are kinda small, making my swimming ability lack. But they help me quickly change my direction while running because I have less weight and small paws work well that way. I have very long legs, well as far as long legs go for a Dalmatian I guess... It makes me much better and running and such. Which I love to do, it makes me especially stealthy while hunting. My coat makes me look like a bush during the winter, or that's what grandma used to tell me when I was just a pup. It's black and white pattern helps me blend in with the snow, I really do love the snow... Oh yea right lost my train of thought there! My eyes are dark brown, I dont know a real reason why, I guess I was just born that way. Though all my siblings have green eyes, which really throws me off track. My tail is of average length, it sways at all the right times and seems to work quiet well. And like the rest of my body its pretty spotted with those black patches of fur my mother called 'Birth marks' I dont think thats what their really called. I have a lot of spots, I cant even count how many black dots are on my body, though I have more on my face then on the rest of my body. Likes & Dislikes; Likes He loves the wind in his face. He really, really, really, likes to howl. He likes running. Hunting is something that he loves doing Another thing he likes is sitting by a fire. Dislikes He hates being bossed around, though being in the Dystopian Pack doesnt help that. He hates being cooped up in a small space. He doesnt like to fight. Hates when someone hurts a lady. The thing he hates the most in the world is being stuck on this island! Goals & Desires; Goals A goal of his is to escape the Dystopian pack and go back to his home. Another goal of his is to fall in love and have a family. His final and most important goal, is to howl with his friends. Desires He desires a home where he truly belongs. He also desires a love. His final desire is to belong and no longer be an outcast. Strengths & Weaknesses; Strengths He is a great runner, which makes his hunting excellent. His coat blends in with the snow, making it easier to hunt and such. Weaknesses He cant swim all that well He isnt a big fighter, making him seem weak. Dystopian Pack

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There are a few things you need to change before being accepted, but besides that it looks pretty good!

• Copyright Image Your picture of your character has a (c) which I,m assuming is not by you. There is also white text at the bottom that further would mean it's copyrighted. We ask that you change it to a non copyrighted image. You can find one of those on DA under stock images or on Flickr under Creative Commons.
  
  
• Time Period Since the site is fairly new, all the characters here should be for the most part just "getting here" because all of them woke up at the same time. I,ll later establish a date for that event, so please change it to from one year to something like one week or so.
  
  
• Loyal Member Since you haven't role played with this character in this pack and haven't really interacted with others of this pack, I ask for you to change this until this is true.
  

After you fix these three things I,ll re evaluate him, and hopefully accept him!

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Alright, I fixed the image and the part where I put a 'Loyal member' and 'A year'. ^^

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ACCEPTED!